Reflective Journal

1. ช่วยให้เข้าใจถึงวิธีการเขียนภาษาอังกฤษที่ถูกต้องตามหลัก และแนะนำวิธีเขียนที่ถูกต้องอย่างเหมาะสม แต่น่าจะมีการการแนะนำงานเขียนแบบระบบอัตโนมัติ อาจารย์จะได้ไม่ต้องมาเปิิดดูที่ละคน

2. การเน้นกระบวนการเขียนทำให้รู้ถึงหลักไวยกรณ์ในการเขียนงานแบบถูกต้อง

3. ไม่พบปัญหาที่ในการเขียน โดยใช้ Weblog-based E-portfolio

4. ควรจะมีการแนะนำวิธีการเขียนมากกว่านี้ เช่น วิธีแนะนำการเขียนที่เป็นภาษาไทยอย่างชัดเจน เพราะภาษาอังกฤษฟังไม่ค่อยเข้าใจ

Second Draft

In the next 15 years,I would like to drive the solar car with solar energy. This car is named "Warp Car". It has little three wheels and circle shape like a UFO. Warp car needed as solar energy. It only run on solar power from the sun. They are very stable and can come in different sizes. To keep the car running smoothly,(Pimentel,1994). Solar energy from the sun is the main fuel necessary for this car. The solar energy is enough for one hour at an average speed of three-hundred point five kilometers (300.5 km/h). In my opinion this car will be sold around 20 million baht. I'm very confident that the Warp car will be replaced the gasoline car in the next 15 years.

Reference
(Pimentel,1994) Solar car : car is a solar vehicle used for land transport.from https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solar_car

First Draft

In the future,I would like to drive the most solar car with solar energy. The name of this car is "Warp Car". It has little three wheels and circle shape like a UFO. The car needed as solar energy. Warp car only run on solar power from the sun. They are very stable and can come in different sizes. To keep the car running smoothly,(Pimentel,1994). Solar energy from the sun is the main fuel necessary for this car. The solar energy is enough for one hour at an average speed of three-hundred point five kilometers (300.5 km/h). I think this car will be sold around 20 million baht. I am sure that the Warp car will be replaced the gasoline car in the next 15 years.

Warp Car

- What is this car name? The name of car is "Warp Car".

- What does it look like? Is has little three wheels and circle shape like a UFO.
- What kind of fuel does it use? It uses solar energy.
- How many kilometers per hour? It can run three-hundred point five kilometers per hour (300.5 km/h ).
- How much does it cost? It's price is 20 million bath.

- What is the In-text citation's name and year of this writing? (Pimentel,1994).

- What source in the reference list that the writer used?  Pimentel, D. (1994) "Renewable Energy: Economic and Environmental Issues" The Sunswift solar car eVe, which holds an FIA world record and in 2016 will be Australia's first road legal solar car. 

Second draft

 

Kim Yuna Korean Figure skater is one of the famous athletes in the world. She won a gold medal at the 2013 World Figure skater Championship at Canada. She is the 2010 Olympic Champion. She is the first female skater to win the Olympic Game, The World Championships and the Four Continents. And the first South Korean figure skater to win a medal at Senior Grand Prix event. Kim Yuna started to practice when she was 7 years old. She had to practices very hard every days for 16 hours. Finally, She is one of the most highly recognized athletes and a famous person in South Korea.

First Draft

          Kim Yuna is slender and white skin and looks beautiful. She plays figure skater excellent. In 2010 Olympic champion; 2014 Silver medalist; 2009,2013 world champion;2009 Four Continents champions. She won a model at an ISU championship. I like her because I like south korean and she looks beautiful. She so amazing and she is my idols. Kim Yuna (김연아) was born September 5 in 1990; 25 years old.She as south korean. She started to practice when she was 7 years olded. Under exhortation of Park Mehee. That she had to practice hard every day and that 16 hours continuously.

Kim Yuna (김연아)

What is his/her name? >> Her name is Kim Yuna.

What does he/she look like? >> She is slender and white skin.She looks beautiful.

What kind of sports does he/she play? >> She plays figure skater excellent.

What has been his/her sport success? >> She is 2010 Olympic champion; 2014 Silver medalist; 2009,2013 world champion;2009 Four Continents champions. She won a model at an ISU championship.

Why do you like him/her? >> I like her because I like south korean and she looks beautiful. She so amazing is my idols.

Other information that you want to write about >> Kim Yuna (김연아) was born September 5 in 1990; 25 years old.She as south korean.